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If we must
collide
let me first say
Oh how I have loved your Elysium eyes
Your blue-shift
Your crescent hips
The joules you wear with (solar) flare
They say we are made of hydrogen
Made beautiful with dust
The both of us
And especially the touch of you
The solar wind, hot and heavy against sore skin
The strange light-year love
Sleeping long and light against the length of me
Listen: All that lies between us is gas and dust
And
If
We Must
Depart
Please fool me slow
You, my nebula, all tangled up in mythology
I could only ever be Perseus
Shed all your layers
Show me the pillars of you in a false dawn,
Slipping through chromatics
Weeping beneath your eroded ribs.
In zodiac light remind me
That this spectrum is only a fraction of you
You, corona, too noble to be seen
Except by those with ruined eyes
Just
Remember if you leave me
I’ll be sorry to see you fading red
collide
let me first say
Oh how I have loved your Elysium eyes
Your blue-shift
Your crescent hips
The joules you wear with (solar) flare
They say we are made of hydrogen
Made beautiful with dust
The both of us
And especially the touch of you
The solar wind, hot and heavy against sore skin
The strange light-year love
Sleeping long and light against the length of me
Listen: All that lies between us is gas and dust
And
If
We Must
Depart
Please fool me slow
You, my nebula, all tangled up in mythology
I could only ever be Perseus
Shed all your layers
Show me the pillars of you in a false dawn,
Slipping through chromatics
Weeping beneath your eroded ribs.
In zodiac light remind me
That this spectrum is only a fraction of you
You, corona, too noble to be seen
Except by those with ruined eyes
Just
Remember if you leave me
I’ll be sorry to see you fading red
Literature
A Prior Engagement
You are etched in my brain.
I hear your voice,
remember your habits,
recall our time together.
And I feel no pain.
no longing
little regret
If only we knew.
that all we'd done was grow up,
maybe
we could have
spared ourselves
but we fought,
and we lied.
We gnashed teeth,
and made promises
we didn't understand,
or didn't want to keep.
For what purpose?
Literature
Take the Risk, Don't Be Stuck Forever.
Stuck. I am stuck. Stuck in writing. Stuck in life. I am stuck. I want to write. I need to write. But I don't know what to write. What to write about. What to do. Where to go. Where do I go from here, what's the next step. I know what I want. So go get it. Not that simple. Why? Other people. Other people getting in my way. That's never stopped you. This time it is. Why? Because it's not up to me. Of course it is, it's your life. Not when it involves someone else's life too. Explain. No. Explain. You won't understand. Try. Make me. I'm not going to make you do anything. And why not, don't you understand that's half of what I want. You want me
Literature
Cadence
it was the softest idea that occurred to me,
while tracing the fresh memory of
your fingers on my skin,
calming me, like the sun going down on the wet, green earth;
this was the tenderness in your face as my tired tears
wet the cushions.
I was wholly encased in your warmth.
there I was slowly suspended, embryonic;
not still, but in a state of cadence,
returning to myself - harmonic
and returning.
you've seen me,
I arrive back to you every morning at the end of my long journeys,
the night still fresh in my cold hair
and the smell of quiet lingering between my fingers;
all the stars still clinging to my clothes and
I arrive at your body. th
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Hope you enjoy <3
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I loved it! normally I am not a fan of formatting like this. in this case I think it's perfect, I especially loved the slow step down into 'and if we must depart please fool me slow" you guided my reading experience in a way that made sense, and it was a pleasurable read!